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Thursday, 4 June 2015

04/06/2015 LM Speedwrite: The World's Galaxy filled with Stars!!
















































Hi everyone, this is my next information report about Stars, I really had a lot of pressure doing this but I finished in time. I wanna say this challenge was pretty hard. I hope you enjoy reading my writing and have a nice day!!! Bye
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 00:14

    Kia ora Lyle,
    Well done on completing your speedwrite within the 40 minutes. Thank you, I did enjoy reading your writing. ☺

    Your next learning steps:
    1) Read your sentences aloud to make sure they make sense and check for grammatical errors.
    2) Use more formal language in your writing. (For example they are instead of they’re)

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  2. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 11:53

    Zdravstvuite Miss Kim,
    This whole information report has been long and I completed it under 40 minutes. I am going to act on my next steps or feedback so I can make it better, thanks for your blog comment. A ani i te ra pai , poroporoaki !!! :)

    From Lyle

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